Dear Mr. William,
This is in response to your email dated January 29 about getting cardholders’ feedback. my name is Lien and I am one of the customers at Foodlink supermarket.
Plymouth City Foodlink is an excellent supermarket, but I have some suggestions to make it even better. First, being an environmental lover, I am always concerned about keeping the Earth to be clean. Therefore, I hope Foodlink supermarket offers a program that encourages consumers to use reusable bags or bring their canvas totes instead of single-use ones to carry supplies.
Besides, regarding the parking lot, it will be better if you can renovate its ground, which has some uneven(rough) and hollow surfaces. it was tough for me to park my car, especially on rainy days.
In addition, I would recommend extending the opening hours of your supermarket to the weekends. that is when people and I have more time to hang out as well as do shopping.
I hope this will be of great help to improve your service.
Best Regards,
Alice Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87013588713 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729885057471 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5345181741 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516854342754 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176002951708 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556570202309 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0322198193765 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064439638753 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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