GIVING BASIC KNOWLEDGE ABOUT PREPARING EXAM
Hi, I’m Sangeeth studying from China Medical University 2015 batch.
I passed the Foreign medical graduation exam (FMGE) in my first attempt and scored 191/300. my preparation time was around 107 days.
KEY POINTS ( Based on my personal experience )
- DON’T RELY on Too many sources for your NOTES
- DON’T LEAVE ANY SUBJECT - Learn the CONCEPTS and get an IDEA of HIGH YIELD topics at least.
(DMA MADE LIST OF HIGH YIELD TOPICS IT HELPED ME A LOT IN PREPARATION https://dmaedu.com/fmge-high-yield-subjects-and-chapters/)
- DON’T ATTEMPT complete mocks so early or so late - Start giving complete mocks before 10 days of your EXAM and attempt at least 5 complete mocks just like the exam scenario.
- DON’T underestimate ONE LINER - although it is not asked directly in the exam, it helps to have a quick revision of all the subjects.
- ONE REVISION IS NEVER ENOUGH (At least 2 revision must, but if you have enough time to revise 3 times, you are good to go)
- FINAL REVISION keeps these subjects in the last row ( ANAT, BIOCHEM, PSM, MICRO, PHARMA, FSM) few days before your exam, these subjects are hard to retain so make them sit in your short term memory.
- As Sakshi Arora mam said in one of her videos,
You don’t need to be Master of a Subject, Be an Ace of all subjects
MY SOURCES
1)MIST NOTES (COVER TO COVER),MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS
ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS.
2)MIST NOTES - (IMP TOPICS),MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS
MICRO,PSM
3)PREPLADDER NOTES - (IMP TOPICS),MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS
PHARMA,OPTHA
4)MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS
ALL SHORT SUBJECTS
I NEVER TOUCHED MEDICINE
TEST SOURCES
1)FMGE SOLUTIONS SUBJECT WISE(WITH EXPLANATIONS)
2)PREPLADDER CHAMPIONSHIP COMPLETE MOCKS (1-4)
3)FMGE SOLUTION COMPLETE MOCKS (2)
4)MIST COMPLETE MOCKS (2)
BEFORE APPEARING TO EXAM
I COMPLETED 9 subjects (CTC) MIST notes and important topics of 4 subjects
MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL SUBJECTS AND 8 COMPLETE MOCKS.
I would like to share the strategy & timeline of my preparation, I believe it would help some for planning their preparation.
I joined the MIST vacation batch in January and attended a few subjects. But I was not serious about my preparation, then corona made us all stay at home and I decided to appear in December Fmge 2020 and took a long break from studies.
But my friends suggested giving an attempt for JUNE FMGE 2020 and then I started my actual preparation on 16 May 2020.
As I started my preparation very late, my idea was to cover at least 13 subjects(MIST NOTES).
I Planned a maximum of 7 days for big subjects,
1) 4 days to study the notes once
2) 1 day to revise the notes
3) 2 days to do FMGE solutions with explanations.
As I mentioned earlier, I can only finish 9 subject’s Mist notes (cover to cover) and important topics from PSM, PHARMA, MICRO, OPTHA.
Revision is the key for this Exam,
I managed to finish my second revision on 2nd august and had 29 days for my final revision.
On my final revision, I spent most of my time concentrating on One-liners and Complete mock tests. But the bitter truth is whatever we prepared, Fmge June 2020 is one of the hardest papers, and 95% questions are clinical.
I and most felt it is impossible to pass this attempt. I left the exam center with the mindset to prepare for my next attempt.
Questions where too large and it felt so hard to manage time.
I felt it is practically impossible to read and understand every word of the question, so I followed the skimming technique (Quickly reading the question and just picked a few important points)
so I had at least 35 minutes in both parts 1&2 of the exam and it was more than enough to recheck all my answers and to make corrections.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...OURCES 1MIST NOTES COVER TO COVER,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,...
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...IST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. ...
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...S + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES -...
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...LUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TO...
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...TOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ON...
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...GERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM ...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...NT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDE...
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...,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ON...
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Suggestion: , MIST
...ICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPT...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...SM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST O...
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...MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ALL...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...S + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ALL SHORT SUBJECTS ...
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...notes and important topics of 4 subjects MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL ...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...d important topics of 4 subjects MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL SUBJECTS AND 8 ...
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... topics from PSM, PHARMA, MICRO, OPTHA. Revision is the key for this Exam, I ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3139.0 1615.20841683 194% => OK
No of words: 636.0 315.596192385 202% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93553459119 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02185627292 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84355380152 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 176.041082164 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481132075472 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.9 506.74238477 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.614479031 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.47826087 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.652173913 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34782608696 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 41.0 4.38176352705 936% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955821056625 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034491952453 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432481495889 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228777144578 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396504394189 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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... time was around 107 days. KEY POINTS Based on my personal experience - DON’...
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... POINTS Based on my personal experience - DON’T RELY on Too many sources for you...
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...ION keeps these subjects in the last row ANAT, BIOCHEM, PSM, MICRO, PHARMA, FSM f...
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... MY SOURCES 1MIST NOTES COVER TO COVER,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PH...
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Line 16, column 33, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
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Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...OURCES 1MIST NOTES COVER TO COVER,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,...
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...LUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TO...
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...TOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ON...
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...GERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM ...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...NT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDE...
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Suggestion: , PSM
...,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ON...
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Suggestion: , MIST
...ICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPT...
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Line 20, column 37, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...SM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST O...
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Line 21, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , OPTHA
...MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ALL...
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Line 22, column 7, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...S + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ALL SHORT SUBJECTS ...
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...ORT SUBJECTS I NEVER TOUCHED MEDICINE TEST SOURCES 1FMGE SOLUTIONS SUBJECT WI...
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Line 33, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...LETE MOCKS 2 BEFORE APPEARING TO EXAM I COMPLETED 9 subjects CTC MIST notes an...
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Line 34, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...notes and important topics of 4 subjects MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL ...
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Line 35, column 6, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...d important topics of 4 subjects MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL SUBJECTS AND 8 ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 49, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... topics from PSM, PHARMA, MICRO, OPTHA. Revision is the key for this Exam, I ma...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3139.0 1615.20841683 194% => OK
No of words: 636.0 315.596192385 202% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93553459119 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02185627292 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84355380152 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 176.041082164 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481132075472 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.9 506.74238477 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.614479031 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.47826087 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.652173913 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34782608696 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 41.0 4.38176352705 936% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955821056625 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034491952453 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432481495889 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228777144578 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396504394189 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.