The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of enegry in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
Sumarise the information by selecteing and reporting the main features, and maek comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph shows clearly the report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Overall, he consumption if energy in USA from 1980 to 2015 has sightly increased. Petrol and oil have much increased from 1995 to 2005. Meanwhile coal and natural gas were slightly fluctuation between 1985 to 2005. Beside that nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower remained steady from 1995 to 2005.
In 2010, the consumption of energy growth steady expect for hydropower did not change much. It was predicted that the number of consumption of energy in USA will be gradually growth from 2020 to 2030 specially for coal, petrol and oil but natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower are expected to no changing in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... have much increased from 1995 to 2005. Meanwhile coal and natural gas were slightly fluc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 1615.20841683 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 123.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09756097561 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62713610999 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 176.041082164 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 506.74238477 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.4027065496 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164964057477 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882184586283 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11387252276 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160500705271 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136083025146 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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