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"Americans" is a popular US television show about spice. However, there is a real story about spice, which involved an officer CRA, who had been in prison for 20 years. His name is Kevin Malary. In an interview, he said that he had serious schoolboy errors. Also, he assured that teenagers now have problems, after which experience appears in their lives. He says that he realized that he was under pressure and stress. Kevin lived with his wife Maria. He recalls that his family consisted of 9 children and he was one of them. "This life was a dream," says Kevin without sarcasm.
Max was a journalist in the UK and told me that Kevin went to school, and there was also a church with a Chinese name, where people who worked at CRA went.
Next - Fred. Fred is a mechanic who talked to Kevin many times. In most cases, they talked about cars and dogs. They had a big, smart dog. People like Fred, like people who like dogs. And he, along with his wife, thought Kevin was a very kind and good person, they said that they like him. However, Malari worked in agency, where there was a problem with the money, which means that they did not have enough money for a full life. His son played the piano, but he did not took off money from his father, because he knew about the problem. At work, Kevin said that people should not go to the USA, since they can work through a computer in China. The psychologist talked about some alternative profiles about spice. The first is predatory people, and the second is majority.
Gent said that American lives are at risk. The most potential damaged information was about the UK intelligence apparition in China.
While Malari made a big mistake, and when he realized this, it was terrible. Neighbors noticed that Kevin strangely threw garbage, he looked around to the sides, making sure that no one was looking. The second case was when he beat a dog, and the dog whined throughout the street. The neighbors saw this and led her into the garage, thinking what kind of person he was. Finally he was detained. He made 25 thousand dollars to save a secret to the China. In court, he said that his love for the country would never disappear. After his arrest, his wife looked positive, although she knew that 20 years is a lot. When she visited him in prison, he saw that she was depressed. And after 20 years he went out, he was surprised that everything had changed, even buildings. Yet he believes in the American dream as much as he loves his country. Even if he had difficult situations, he realized that the problem was not in the country, but in himself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 566, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...one of them. 'This life was a dream,' says Kevin without sarcasm. Max was...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...is son played the piano, but he did not took off money from his father, because he k...
^^^^
Line 9, column 371, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...e, thinking what kind of person he was. Finally he was detained. He made 25 thousand do...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, kind of, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 7.30460921844 397% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 73.0 24.0651302605 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55084745763 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40688366156 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 16.0721442886 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6219407824 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1764705882 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55882352941 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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