MY FAVORITE COLOR
My favorite colors are white and blue. I like them because I love snow and white. In the living room, there are two pale blue sofas that are opposite from each other. It is a white table between them. There is also a dark blue vase which is on the table.
I have a lot of white and blue things in my bedroom, too. The curtains are white with tiny blue daises. In the center of the ceiling, there is a bright, glowing star-shaped, blue light. The wall is dark blue with many decorated pine trees, a happy snowman family and fluffy snow all over the place. I don't like my school uniform so much for they only have a little bit blue or white. My uniform is a red T-shirt with a collar that have a white stripe near the edge and the school logo on the left. The skirt is nude without decorations. I would be very happy if everything is all blue and white.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y and fluffy snow all over the place. I dont like my school uniform so much for they...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ol uniform so much for they only have a little bit blue or white. My uniform is a red T-sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11976047904 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05094846741 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5376811479 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.9230769231 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150246272708 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072666359383 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173473923113 0.0667982634062 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132497701473 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543132975793 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 13.0946893788 34% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 50.2224549098 169% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 11.3001002004 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.73 12.4159519038 46% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.74 8.58950901804 67% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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