Our class has watched a round-table discussion about what young people can learn from older generations. You have made the notes below:
Areas where young people could learn from older generations:
1. Work
2. Relationships
3. money
Some opinions expressed in the discussion:
¨People with work experience can tell you what the job you are considering is like.¨
¨Older people can give wise advice when you have a problem with a friend.¨
¨It´s hard to manage your money when you start living independently.¨
Write an essay discussing two of the areas in your notes. You should explain in which area young people could gain most from older generations, giving reasons in support of your answer. You may, if you wish, make use of the opinions expressed in the discussion, but you should use your own words as far as possible.
Some people said that the earlier generation always has proper behaviors in all extent of life. In this essay I will explain my opinion on what inexperienced people could study from elderly in this case of communication and property management
Firstly, mature generation can give us astute guidance when you in trouble with a companion. The fact is that in each relationship always exist some argument issues. Young people who are not experienced should easily get angry and may lead to cracking relationships. In this case, with a lot more experiences in compared with the younger generation, the elderly can guide us the most ingenious solution to solve this problem, makes sure your friendship gets more cohesive.
Secondly, the wisdom that comes according to age also is used to help the younger generation in the field of finance. Administering personal financial is a tough skill especially for young people when living separately, so this is necessary to receive the elderly’s advice on how to budget, save and invest money to have a reasonable spending plan. For instance, when I have learned far from my house, I had to ask my mother’s opinion in order to have an intelligent payment strategy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of communication and property management Firstly, mature generation can give us a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94896592045 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3076565275 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15833520609 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596534456658 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492033030565 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104839923191 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291751335352 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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