Sefl-introduction
Hi everyone. My name is Thanh Ngan. I’m 19 year old. I’m from Kien Giang. My family has 4 people as my parents , my young sister and me. My young sister and I are twins. Different from my young sister who has learned GP-general practitioner at Can Tho University of Medicine and Pharmacy, I choose to study English language. In the past, my parents expected that both of me and my young sister would become doctors. I tried to study doctor, but I found myseft not suitable for it, then I told my parents about it, fortunately they put themselves in my shoes to understand and support me. I’m a person who likes to communicate, explore and learn about unique culture of countries around the world. After graduating, I want to become a tour giude inland, and the first place of work will be Phu Quoc Island. I dream of showing beauty spot of my country to friends around the world to admire and know about it
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-02-22 | nguyenthithanhngan | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng. My family has 4 people as my parents , my young sister and me. My young sister...
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Line 2, column 703, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure of countries around the world. After graduating, I want to become a tour giu...
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Line 2, column 716, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies around the world. After graduating, I want to become a tour giude inland, an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47305389222 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46315680376 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9230967222 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9090909091 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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