“Some people enjoy change and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches. Which approach you prefer? Explain why.”
Life is very interesting, it contains many stories, emotions and friends. Some people choose positive living, enjoy change and look forward to new experiences. But others like gloomy life and do not want to change their usual habits. In my opinion, I cling to the first method. To support my views, I demonstrate three of my ideas as follows.
First of all, the possitive living help people act proactively in activities. Take travelling as an example, person who lives actively will determine where they want to go, what they want to eat and use money indenpently. They not only have a new journey, but they also have new experiences and new story. As they get older, they can tell to their children that they used to live all their life. That is a amazing story!
Besides, active people can be satisfied with themselves. They are not forced by living conditions, livelihood. Their lives is fresh, their heathy is also stronger, better and more comfortable. The life is more meaning and wonderful. Every day is a nice day and awesome experience.
It is an undeniable that passive lives make people become cramped, lower-power and dejected. They can decide what they want to do and need. Every day is repeat until they die. What a pity liffe!
In conclusion, I fell strongly that we should enjoy change, look for new chances and live by all life. You only live once!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79411764706 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56122336443 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8573710142 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0526315789 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5263157895 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33376493675 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945653651393 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881910939975 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168556840334 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498361957914 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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