STATEMENT OF EXPLANATION
I am glad to introduce myself as Tom Sabu, hail from Kerala, India. I would like to specialize in
business accounting as it provides a wide scope of employment opportunities in this competitive
field. So I decided to pursue Business Accounting from St. Lawrence College, Canada.
Accounting is essential for all types of business organizations, even for individuals and families.
Financial transactions occur all along in business organizations with a government office, non-trading concerns and professionals. This two-year program will give me an in-depth knowledge of financial accounting, management accounting, auditing, and finance and prepare me to enter
the business industry in an accounting capacity. This program is mainly designed for career-oriented
Individuals like me with an interest in the dynamic and challenging world of accounting. The
main modules of this program are Business Mathematics, Introductory Accounting,
Management Accounting, Microeconomics, Supply Chain Management, Taxation and Financial
Management etc. On successful completion of this program, I can seek employment in
Accounting capacity in different multinational companies, banks and institutions. I am sure that,
by doing this course, I will get a wonderful chance to pave the very strong basement of my career with
on diversity as well as multi-cultural concerns and gaining knowledge in different
accounting topics with the global mindset.
I have come to know that, St. Lawrence College is one of the most diversified and highly reputed
colleges in Canada. The facilities given by the college will help me to develop my personality
and to gain the social and recreational experience. As this program being connecting candidates
from different cultures and to exchange thoughts and ideas.
Canada offers a fresh and different perspective in the education sector mainly because its
dynamics are diverse. It has attracted a large number of Asian students bringing different cultural,
political and religious perspectives to the table. The government has also taken a special interest in
regulating the education sector hence many universities came in the top 100 universities in the
world. Facilities for teaching, training and research are world-class in terms of state-of-the-art
laboratories and classrooms, outstanding libraries and modern technology. Canada is a safe,
multicultural, friendly and harmonious society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98319327731 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42969032108 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2018184133 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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