Write about a jounrnal about your experience learning English
I am learning English because I want to go to discover amazing countries and landmarks. And language is a problem . We have to learn English to be able to check out those awesome places. According to the comments on BBC 6 minutes learning English, many people said that English is the only passport to the world to uncover the breathtaking location that will blow you mind.
I feel like English is very hard. But I believe in myself that I can “conquer” this. A lot of rules in English make me confused. I am so frustrated, but each day I tried to find the solution. Furthermore, I also sometimes record books on Epic and RazKid. This helps me to improve my pronunciation.
The easy things for me in English are the catchy phrases, such as: scaredy cats, bro and so on. The way that helps me understand these words, is to look at the word and try to determine the meaning.
My difficulties in English are grammar, writing and listening. Grammar makes me really confused about when to use this or that. In writing, when I am writing a story, I sometimes create ideas that do not connect with each other. Listening test is my huge issue. The people in the recording sometimes speak fast, slow, accents, low volume. Then at the end, my results are very low.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
I am learning English because I want to ...
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Suggestion:
...English because I want to go to discover amazing countries and landmarks. And lan...
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Suggestion: .
...and landmarks. And language is a problem . We have to learn English to be able to ...
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Suggestion:
...g location that will blow you mind. I feel like English is very hard. But I ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s helps me to improve my pronunciation. The easy things for me in English are th...
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...ord and try to determine the meaning. My difficulties in English are grammar, ...
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...en at the end, my results are very low.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, really, so, then, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63596491228 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64426255934 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635964912281 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.393299139 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7222222222 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185718319386 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465770626046 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522791762464 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929949626886 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054991937353 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.