write about your most memorable trip
My memorable trip is went to Binh Duong province. I did not joyful when I heard that because I have to learn military training. The first, I received two clothes uniform and a pair of shoes but they are not fit me, they are really large. Because of have so many student so the food is cooked unclean, sometime you can see the some insect or grasses or land. I also dislike the toilet there, it is really inconvenient when It only have 8 bathroom with a cistern. Because I am a introvert so there are about 36 people in one room make me feel uncomfortable. However, I also learned a lot of lesson there. I need get up early at 5a.m to do exercise and I go to bed early at 9 p.m, things that help me intensify my healthy. I studied about discipline such as learn or eat functual. There are lots of trees there, it make me feel relax, comfortable. The instructor give his students picking vegetables or scanned leaves. I learned with many teachers about politics lesson and guns, it is interesting for me. Although the trip have some things make me uncomfortable but I learned many things so this trip is most my memorable trip.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ooked unclean, sometime you can see the some insect or grasses or land. I also disli...
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...r land. I also dislike the toilet there, it is really inconvenient when It only h...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... it is really inconvenient when It only have 8 bathroom with a cistern. Because I am...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bathroom' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bathrooms'.
Suggestion: bathrooms
...really inconvenient when It only have 8 bathroom with a cistern. Because I am a introver...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...It only have 8 bathroom with a cistern. Because I am a introvert so there are about 36 ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...8 bathroom with a cistern. Because I am a introvert so there are about 36 people ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun lesson seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of lessons'.
Suggestion: a lot of lessons
... uncomfortable. However, I also learned a lot of lesson there. I need get up early at 5a.m to d...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
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...tual. There are lots of trees there, it make me feel relax, comfortable. The instruc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3619047619 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58428882922 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9181689031 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149160224741 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507023303773 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807825889136 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149160224741 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.