business
although such topics, likely, will never yield a consensual agreement, the constructive dialogue on business whether it is small or big is to maximize the profit can lead to thought-provoking discussion. My view is that irrespective to the many arguments that exist on either side, any business is made to maximize the profit whether it is small or big because business is made for gaining money.
there a number of reasons in favor of my stance,.To begin with, when anybody starts a business he is searching for benefits as a normal result for his work. It is important to note that unless there are profits from work whatever its size of business many people would not take the risk of losing money. therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that all types of business is made to maximize profit.
in addition, when anybody starts a new business which commonly starts small by\the time he will try to grow his work as a result of gaining more money.
in an article published in the New York Times shows that there is a big competition between big and small project to increase their profits. This shows that today everyone is searching for profits in the business market.
in conclusion, I see there is equally potential evidence to support the argument I have provided above and hence my opinion is the business is made to maximize the profit whether it is small or big.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7949790795 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71862870494 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523012552301 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0604481524 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339386003518 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172739329585 0.0925447433944 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772109454868 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202414144313 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671110048227 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.