In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
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Do you think card-less society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Recently, phenomenon of the cashless society has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the advantages and dissadvantages of it?" Whereas it is a widely held view that card-less society is beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the the international banking system standpoint, a bank card is bound up inextricably with a credit card, which indicates it lead to both less paper money and trees conservation. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between electronic banking and healthy bank balance as well as an exponential increase in foreing currency. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of the internationa bussiness is correlated positively with not only cash ratio but also eurodollar.
Within the realm of economic, without the slightest doubt, making money attribute to eventure capital, in that it would come down to private investment, capitalist society, and a short term cridit. A salient example of such attribution is online shopping, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint electronic trading problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to internet shoping, time saving , and even security. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of new technology .
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of cashless society is outweigh its disadvantages . However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61724137931 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18654742585 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 139.433497537 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696551724138 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7544919827 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172105368452 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421215685625 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705272132425 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103193141975 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807461317943 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 55.0591133005 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.94827586207 221% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.