Certain kinds of music promote learning in life. Agree or disagree.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s is a colossal upsurge in learning a music. There is a wide spread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments is in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that mostly every person like music in a free time listen a music and feel relax can not only contribute to improve concentration. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience needless to say these entire merits stand one is good stead chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication or perseverance hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of make us aware of absolute music.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of I agree with certain kind of music promote learning in life and music is best way of sharing feeling are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7480620155 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73024807518 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3854106816 50.4703680194 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195858702143 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735584589642 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118282921088 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147409338589 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149640126759 0.0609392437508 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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