Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two halves occidental and oriental. So there are bound to be differences on social, economical and cultural front as well. Therefore, the issue of nowadays children watching television significantly than in the past is no exception and irrefutable.
In other to justify the view point, there are advantages and disadvantages associated with watching television. Television keep us updated about latest development. However, excessive watching of television is detrimental to our educational system especially for children.
Although, some people believed that watching television has no effect on children. They are forgetting that constant watching of television can reduced the level of comprehension and loss of interest in reading. Another, pivotal aspect of my discussion is the results of research concluded on children. The result shows that children can become additive to television and no longer fines interest in reading and writing this can have negative effect to children's education.
Although, the situation seems dire, but there are severe steps we can take to make tangible changes. Firstly, parent should set time for watching television. Secondly, parent can award incentives to their kids for focusing more on their studies than watching television.
As has been noted, I would like to say that although, television is highly beneficial but we must be prudent to strike a balance, logical and rational approach towards the same for the optimal and fruitful outcomes of efforts or utilization of resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
... television. Television keep us updated about latest development. However, excessive watchin...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ational system especially for children. Although, some people believed that watching tel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57916666667 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99420447142 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629166666667 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1404172982 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259380978836 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839239168967 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764266565706 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120748117346 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729730499561 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.