Children should not be forced by law to be educated by either public schools or home schooling if their parents do not wish them to do so. Do you agree or disagree ?
Education plays a pivotal role in one's as well as country's development which provides a better understanding of daily life things and their utilization appropriately. Considering this, some people argue that education law should not be enforced on children whose parents do not intend to educate their offspring while, other believe that it is the fundamental right of everyone and this facility must be accessible to every child.
To commence with, it is evident that the literacy rate of a nation is the key factor for its economical and social development and has evolved the human life to a great extent whether from invention of fire to stepping on the moon or using letters for communication to mobile phones. Education has assisted each sector by providing sufficient information and required platform for the inventions. Therefore, it should be mandatory for not only children but for all aged groups.
Moreover, education also plays a crucial role in broadening of intellectual origin of a person which allow them to perform effectively at various circumstances and how to deal with different kind of personalities diplomatically. In addition to this, it also lead people to rise their standard of living by enhancing their opportunities of development. Thus, it is favorable if a law is levied on students for their betterment of future career.
To recapitulate, this forgoing discussion propounds that even though education should be essential for everyone yet, its the government's responsibility to make it accessible cost free for those who are incapable of paying huge amount of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28515625 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13776445832 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1930847884 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.333333333 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189015188723 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730465275415 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737703507208 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108651299066 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735121154005 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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