The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970's. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
Animals' rights have always been a matter of debate for decades. Some people even try to keep wild animals at home while others opt for visiting them in zoos. In my opinion, zoos should not be banned because it is inside the zoos where people go to visit wild animals, and they are the places where scientists study animal behavior.
First of all, people are used to visiting and play with animals. When I was young, I remember going every weekend to the zoos since they were the only places to meet lions,tigers, snakes, and other animals. Not only could I play with them, but I also could learn from them.
Moreover, there are numerous scientists who need to be close to different species in order to study them. Some animals require special treatment for not to become extinct.
Finally, if zoos are not banned, everyone benefits from them, hence it becomes a win win.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tigers
... they were the only places to meet lions,tigers, snakes, and other animals. Not only co...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: win
... benefits from them, hence it becomes a win win.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, so, while, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 1207.87684729 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 242.827586207 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63870967742 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21607033777 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 139.433497537 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 379.143842365 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6124177814 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8888888889 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238430785509 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948594724852 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103222829716 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122640134213 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107041263179 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 55.0591133005 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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