the claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970's. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? should zoos be banned?
In recent day, The hot argument is speaking thought out the country is about animals have been hunting or zoos helping to protect them. In this case, I will say that animals are protecting and some of them were hunting. For instances, some people say that animals also have their feeling we should not attack them but, some other people's says that animals have more strength when compared with humans and it is dangerous for our life so we should hunt them or keep it in zoos. we will discuss detail information in the below paragraph.
Here, some of the benefits of protecting animals. Motherless animals are searching for foods and they came out of wild then they don’t know how to go. Like this kind of animals were protecting in zoos by giving proper foods and medicines.
Furthermore, By keeping zoos also have a demerit for animals, because they need to live in natural environments to live their life instant of being in the surrounding environment in zoos by this case they might be angry and try to escape from that zone in these case they may hit some people's are even they hunt. To avoid these cases, zoos keepers should need to trained give a proper guide to handle animals.
To sum up, we need detail information about animals because in zoos animals had protected and helping for their needs. so, From this only we can know that zoos should be banned or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69918699187 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30898960791 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540650406504 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1033423432 50.4703680194 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.090909091 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268741527982 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108543310671 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709637887564 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17573920768 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621291268211 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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