Global climate change phenomenon is one of the most important issue in recent years. Because of excessive pollution and increase of green house gases in atmosphere, we are seeing the climate change. Nowadays, the earth is observing hotter summer, colder winters, excessive rain in some area or extremely low rain in other places. Everyone including individual, organization and government need to contribute to tackle this issue.
Firstly, Government as a whole need to educate people about adverse effect of climate change and also about the reasons behind the climate change. A proper and well reached education about this issue is the main weapon to combat this. Only creation of laws will not change anything. Properly educated people can only understand how to abide by these laws for benefit of environment.
Secondly, all companies have major role to fight against this. All the manufacturing companies should check the quantity of emission of green house gases from their factory chimneys. Use of in-build smoke purifier inside a chimney is one of the many options to handle this. Also, major reason for pollution is combustion of conventional fuels like oil, coal etc. So, instead of using those, companies should look for other alternatives like hydro-power, wind energy which are environment friendly.
Last but not the least, we as a individual also hold great responsibilities to encounter climate change. Government, companies are made of individuals. If we as a individual, are unaware about cause and impact, everything will fail. We should learn ourselves, help others to learn and counter against any such activities of pollution. We should also look for new non-conventional energies for our homes like solar energy. Our few small steps have bigger combined impact.
So in conclusion, we can say that individual, companies and government have huge role in tackling climate change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ndly. Last but not the least, we as a individual also hold great responsibili...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...anies are made of individuals. If we as a individual, are unaware about cause and...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er combined impact. So in conclusion, we can say that individual, companies an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35215946844 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84896070168 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6573227193 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.55 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.05 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162238711971 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469954960555 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550318943308 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931744144825 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540333551748 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.