The world at present is getting topmost in every sector. To get success in your desired field one must have sound knowledge of it. Some people believe that competitive environment brings excellence whereas some say it does not always bring good results. But I agree, competition in school and universities bring excellence in students and they must be encouraged for this.
To begin with, competition makes a person find a better way than his/ her companion which helps to prove themselves outstanding. This results in increasing excellence. For instance, the competition among classmates for getting the first rank in class in my school days helped improve my studies. My maths knowledge became very good. The school or university family must help to create such environment by using different methods. This will boost the excellence higher and higher.
In addition to the competitive environment for excellence, encouraging people for it is also very important. People whoever do best in their work should be rewarded for their performance and hard labour.This encourages them to do more better and fully dedicated to their profession. A student not interested in studies, if encouraged and convinced can change themselves into the brilliant student. Also, prizes given to those brilliant students will motivate fellow students to desire for the same. Hence, encouraging students play an important role in achieving excellence.
In a nutshell, creating a competitive environment in the school or university and other sectors to bits of help to bring excellence. To get this excellence encouragement also has a significant role. All these factors create an environment for innovation in all the fields.
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- A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...d for their performance and hard labour.This encourages them to do more better and f...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... hard labour.This encourages them to do more better and fully dedicated to their profession...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39179104478 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99671935794 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4954335043 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2777777778 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 6.9802955665 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202285386809 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645469111278 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791439159467 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141577817374 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609499097086 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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