Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, people also say that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rminer' data-pwa-suggestions='a university~the university' data-pw...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rminer' data-pwa-suggestions='a university~the university' data-pw...
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Line 1, column 1066, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...ge university experience create issues. here, I will explain my outlook by scrutiniz...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ce, can learn different subject through students interaction is all locals concocted a b...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rminer' data-pwa-suggestions='a university~the university' data-pw...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rminer' data-pwa-suggestions='a university~the university' data-pw...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...edge is the spirit to overcome society. so, key glance on
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rminer' data-pwa-suggestions='a university~the university' data-pw...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rminer' data-pwa-suggestions='a university~the university' data-pw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, may, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in particular, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5185.0 1207.87684729 429% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 418.0 242.827586207 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 12.4043062201 5.00649968141 248% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 3.92707691288 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.8508319235 2.71678728327 510% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 216.0 139.433497537 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516746411483 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1449.0 379.143842365 382% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.5 1.57093596059 223% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 12.0 1.56157635468 768% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 326.297555422 50.4703680194 647% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 398.846153846 104.977214359 380% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.1538461538 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0228372762118 0.242375264174 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279996536153 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192856691799 0.071462118173 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0229395466869 0.151781067708 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00897751550371 0.0609392437508 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.0 12.6369458128 419% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -121.74 53.1260098522 -229% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 6.54236453202 324% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.2 10.9458128079 349% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 55.23 11.5310837438 479% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 55.0591133005 227% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 53.0 10.5123152709 504% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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