There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
The enduring dissension in the public psyche is inventions. Besides, it has to assay whether inventions are a constructive or adverse <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-916E016233936D99D2FEC85FA8B5C3DF" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_BRUNT_25" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="grunt" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="brunt" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">brunt</pwa> on society. Divergences with the populace are inventions are improving the society whilst others retaliate that inventions generate problems. In this essay, I shall <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F7F74B26530860136127EC3AB0220980" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2036" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: explain" data-pwa-suggestions="explain" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="elucidate" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">elucidate</pwa> my outlook by scrutinising both sides of the argument.
To embark with computer inventions fulsome, initially, Overuse of the computer leads to poor eyesight is well deliberate eminent a hindrance in society. Further, children are too much addicted to computer games that spoil their academic. Thus, the discrepancy measures connote that the people once practised in computer shunning the manual work. Hence, above precede effectuate despondent in this society.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-71E27C4D229560CBF7386A194B8223A9" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_407" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: The" data-pwa-suggestions="The" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="On the contrary, the" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">On the contrary, the</pwa> aforementioned has an awful conjecture desperate topic. The people who outright to contend with computer inventions have wide-ranging forth will enunciate to enhance. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B68318E7068752EDC3D2B41BFA908D2B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Acclaimed" data-pwa-suggestions="Acclaimed" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Moreover, acclaimed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Moreover, acclaimed</pwa> that the computer saves human time and effort. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-97E88676FBD7BDA5E350081F59512B06" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: A" data-pwa-suggestions="A" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Furthermore, a" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Furthermore, a</pwa> notable computer connects to the internet and supports communication. For instance, voice chat, video chat, E-mail, etc. In ancillary, data collected in the computer will avoid doing repetitive work. So, vital around the recompense aloft uncovered will converse and construe diverse eminent effectuate people here too sanguine.
Overall, aforesaid concludes an apex with assorted uncompromising moot which refutes the hostile in inventions. hence, the decisive entail Government must take proper steps to cut its negative effects, Prominent in wrangle upsurge detriment with no partiality will precise my prospect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3275.0 1207.87684729 271% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 319.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 10.2664576803 5.00649968141 205% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.8226279024 2.71678728327 435% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 204.0 139.433497537 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639498432602 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 926.1 379.143842365 244% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.9 1.57093596059 185% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 167.510532644 50.4703680194 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.647058824 104.977214359 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0137985245513 0.242375264174 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204493695897 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339736395838 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0216737511701 0.151781067708 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121762570208 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 12.6369458128 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -56.77 53.1260098522 -107% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.7 10.9458128079 235% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 42.29 11.5310837438 367% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.32886699507 139% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 55.0591133005 258% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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