1. The ability to learn more than one language will be less important in the future. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of learning <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-9C073D13B636EA87FEB7F8C342713777" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1067" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: over" data-pwa-suggestions="over" data-pwa-dictionary-word="more than" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">more than</pwa> one language has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “would it be important<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7756BFA3B85150E4E71D035233829541" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_295" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word=" in the future" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> in the future</pwa>?”. Whereas it is a widely held view that the ability to communicate in <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E0F35F854D06D1C439AC813600B180A2" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1067" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: over" data-pwa-suggestions="over" data-pwa-dictionary-word="more than" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">more than</pwa> one language is vital, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the communicative standpoint, the effective communication <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-38D4857752C4348396A3B3C1E0A15843" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is bound" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is bound</pwa> up inextricably with the people’s command of language, which <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-89F7A943BA3629EAF25BF23221647C55" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2061" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: shows" data-pwa-suggestions="shows" data-pwa-dictionary-word="indicates" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">indicates</pwa> they lead to both power of expression and sharing opinions. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-387705FFE39E77516B091A490A3DB414" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2033" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: shows" data-pwa-suggestions="shows" data-pwa-dictionary-word="demonstrates" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">demonstrates</pwa> the relationship between social networking and broadening horizon <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0212C1B1DB0F36C084077EFB18D5E9AB" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_117" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: and" data-pwa-suggestions="and" data-pwa-dictionary-word="as well as" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">as well as</pwa> an exponential increase in multinational interactions. Their academic criticism was impressive. researchers<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-037CC77F4C36C47DE3BE34B0C817BD7B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_542" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word=", nevertheless," class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">, nevertheless,</pwa> paid heed to more job opportunities, business links, and future prosperity alike. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-96DEBC3069843114A145E9EF95B378CE" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: My" data-pwa-suggestions="My" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Consequently, my" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Consequently, my</pwa> empirical evidence presented <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3A211FEC5F13877F76854EF2F25DE847" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_218" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="thus far " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">thus far </pwa>supports the contention that the likelihood of better global understanding <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-A8B83274B49EE114A443492BEA8CEA42" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is correlated" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is correlated</pwa> positively with not only the international co-operation but also command of a dominant language.
Within the realm of society and education, without the slightest doubt, mastering a common language attribute to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4D23A44944918A32D490912A85ECAB81" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a language~the language" data-pwa-dictionary-word="language" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">language</pwa> barrier elimination, in that it would come down to the less cultural shock, social customs, and cultural diversity. A salient example of such attribution is the bilingual education, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take the language acquisition for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7FB6D42CC24524670D8F7247263F81DC" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1716" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: pinpointed" data-pwa-suggestions="pinpointed" data-pwa-dictionary-word="had the opportunity to pinpoint" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">had the opportunity</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7FB6D42CC24524670D8F7247263F81DC" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1716" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: pinpointed" data-pwa-suggestions="pinpointed" data-pwa-dictionary-word="had the opportunity to pinpoint" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> to pinpoint</pwa> the studying abroad problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to the social conversation, global training, and even being up-to-date. Besides, this criterion is an indispensable part of modern lifestyle. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of sociocultural aspects of being multilingual.
To conclude<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B2D6DBE14506433B2BCEF54E30C1EB0D" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_420" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word=", as for myself," class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">, as for myself,</pwa> as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-1E0547C5420F4CD79EBFB1D0CC79C009" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_295" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in the future " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in the future </pwa>being bilingual or multilingual will be more important than it is now. however, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover. however, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 10.5418719212 304% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 6.10837438424 295% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 31.9359605911 213% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 7570.0 1207.87684729 627% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 622.0 242.827586207 256% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 12.1704180064 5.00649968141 243% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.99398916966 3.92707691288 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.6636162744 2.71678728327 503% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 321.0 139.433497537 230% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516077170418 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2072.7 379.143842365 547% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.3 1.57093596059 210% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.65517241379 328% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 351.937582148 50.4703680194 697% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 420.555555556 104.977214359 401% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 20.9669160288 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0231606702586 0.242375264174 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208659696312 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0169112761664 0.071462118173 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.02722237736 0.151781067708 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133486142754 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.2 12.6369458128 421% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -106.85 53.1260098522 -201% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 6.54236453202 324% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.6 10.9458128079 334% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 53.9 11.5310837438 467% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 226.0 55.0591133005 410% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 43.0 9.94827586207 432% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 54.0 10.5123152709 514% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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