Computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society. How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people whether computer technology is beneficial or harmful for societies in this world. Some people believe that computer technology has adverse impact more than positive whereas other group argue that positive impacts are more than negative. This essay will discuss both views by analyzing this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
To start with, some percentage of people believe that computer technology throwing new generation to doom in this world. They mention concentration level in this generation has been fallen due to dependency on computers, eventually technology dominate their mind. For example, people are loosing moral values and learning machine language. In addition, such people prefer talk on mobile instead of visiting relative. Eventually computer operated machines are increasing bonding with relatives in societies.
On contrary, in advance technological era of this generation, people can't think their lives without computer. They argue that computers are now soul of human and act as shadow to follow while sleeping also. For example, people can't live without mobile in today's life. While working in office or walking, people are busy with computers. Due to such advancement, this world is now anticipating the life on mars planet. Computer technology has provided a huge break through in medical sector to finish quest for some chronically diseases.
In recapitulate, this essay discussed both views of this argument. In my opinion, computer technology has more advantages and all outweigh the disadvantages. I would recommend that computer technology can be boon if we use it proper directions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5486381323 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8008375645 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1205179034 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8823529412 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210725478294 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681263506993 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548356702935 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141230086119 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504161519872 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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