Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
In pastime, When people used to work and earn in their vicinity but due to increase in literacy people become aware and willingly to move to developed countries to get ease of life. Some people believe that moving to other country for work is departing of their relations with parents and deteriorate link between home country while other argue that it is beneficial for education and living standards. this essay will discuss both views of this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
To start with, people believe to migrate to other countries have myriad and conspicuous reasons and are adequate to arbitrary for their decision. One of them is to raise the standard of education which is not possible in their home country. Due to advance in technology they see their future more comfortable and livable than aboriginal home. In addition, other factors such as crime rates, literacy, ease of lives. Such people accept these influences on general life and make their attendance as migration for growth of their children.
On contrary, people argue that moving to other countries is not appropriate decision and depart from their parents. Firstly they mentioned that people migrate cause brain drain and knowledge is depleted in development of foreign country. Other factors such as deteriorate link with their relatives and parents, lost of religious knowledge are mainly drawback of this view. People impose these epitome example to set their lives in other country which is baseless and cause loss of originality in individual life.
In recapitulate, this essay discuss both views of this arguments, I am reckon to believe that people moving to other country is negative effect on children but it provides multiple opportunity to cross the barrier of international spot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, while, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62686405009 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7028524323 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273024212173 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987393216847 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803602128926 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19139013558 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798415994217 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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