Cultural Shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
Cultural shock happens when a person goes to a new country and experiences a different culture. It is a big problem for immigrants when they move to a new country and witness stark differences in the lifestyles of people in the new nation. It seems like a small problem at the onset, but it can lead to broader psychological issues. Therefore, steps must be taken to eradicate it.
Firstly, efforts must be taken from both sides for complete immersion of the newly arrived immigrant into the new culture. Some of the ways for immersion are to learn the local language and learn about the local food...
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Culture shock happens when
Culture shock happens when some people moved into another place and had a different experience of cultural. It a big issue for any immigrant newbie to deal with a new lifestyle. It seems a small problem, but it could cause any psychological issue. Therefore, we must take steps to eradicate it.
Firstly, efforts need to be taken by both sides to help complete new arrive immigrant into the local culture. For instance, learning the local language, learning about food culture, custom and law. In addition, the receiving country should pay more patience while the newly arrived going through this process.
Secondly, it is important to respect the new culture of diversity. In brief, to accept the difference and acknowledge between two parties can make the combination becomes easy. Thus, kept respect between natives and immigrant must be maintained.
All in all, the best way to solve the culture shock is learning the culture before moving. By acknowledging difference culture diversity respect and patience, it can help most people to avoid culture shock. Hence, every small step can be beneficial for ethnic fusion and protect against cultural shock problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...arrived immigrant into the new culture. Some of the ways for immersion are to learn the loc...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...he process of integration becomes easy. Therefore a mutual respect must be maintained amo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, apart from, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92827004219 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69312701382 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.072852788 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8461538462 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156923212632 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627416706572 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503361654677 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963005776489 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488652682889 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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