Dangerous sports.
We can not deny the danger that attached with dangerous sports like skiing, paragliding, mountain biking, bungee jumping, etc. Doing this kind of sports are getting trendy and widespread amongst the people nowadays. But it also invites the tragedy and accidents with them.The following essay will analysis why people should not do these kind of sports and gives alternet solution to avoid risky sports.
First of all, people do dangerous sports for experiencing thrill and danger, they do not think about the risk behind that sport which can cause their life also. People should think that the risk they taking of their lives are also affects on their family member, loss of a person may not affect on society or country but, it affects on his family.Sports like paragliding and skiing are taking more life than any other sports do, one tiny rope can risk your life while you are at very high attitude. For instance, Michael shumacher is still suffering from his serious injuries which happens while skiing on a mountain.
Secondly, People should choose different types of sports that also helps them to stay fit and healthy, sports like cricket, football, basketball, cycling helps to keep people active and fit. Also it is responsibility of Government to make people cognizance about not doing dangerous sports and avoiding that. Dangerous sports is not only way to bring entertainment in our lives there are also many way to live life, this thing should learn by people.
Overall, rather than risking your life doing extreme sports, people must avoid doing these kind of risky things and should choose a better replacement of entertainment that helps them to improve their health and lifestyle. It is say that "Health is wealth"
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06597222222 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4794851764 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2593178059 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.636363636 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158449544622 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669402978743 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701082518054 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102779769528 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507201920677 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.