Diasporas communities are the human face of globalization, which are becoming more interested in their origins and organizing themselves more effectively, globalization connected with revolution in the transport and in communication technologies, growth in international migrations, reaction against global homogenized along with the end of cold war.
formal written assessment in today's word to assess student's performance has been the epicenter of discussion between multiple forums. some echelons of the society hold this perception that formal written assessment is a good method to assess the student's ability, but some people opine that, it is not a reliable method to assess the whole performance because student only focus on that topics which will be coming in exams. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of formal written assessment.
To set the wheel in the motion, there are plethora of advantages of formal written assessment, it ensure that whether students are learning or not and what is their exact level of learning. if they are lacking in any area, teacher may strengthen that area. In addition, students can improve their weakness by their own.
On the other side of the fence, it has some disadvantages like, it only put the pressure on the students to get the high marks. Furthermore, under pressure students sometimes take wrong decision if they do not get high marks they can commit suicide etc. However, it not only puts pressure, but also affects their mental health.
To recapitulate, having mulled over the above stated information and deliberating all the aspects it can be deduced that the weigt of the advantages compared to its disadvantages are approximately same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20704845815 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82271279172 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9694784444 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.029942657235 0.242375264174 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0147761742223 0.0925447433944 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226435064762 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0183479168734 0.151781067708 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186418117046 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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