Discuss whether design of building will have positive or negative impact in people life& work.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals design of building has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether it positive or negative impact on people life. I will elaborate this notion in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some positive points of structure of buildings. Firstly, innovative designs motivates the people to work in organization environment and enhance creating thinking as they feel working in better infrastructure facility. In present world, people are more attracted to engage with company. Which has proper infrastructure and design for example innovative design encourage people to do better work at the same time it will also increase the productivity of workers.
Secondly, some company design personal cabin for worker which provide much privacy to worker so they feel better. Good structure of building attribute to health of people. Few design have a scientific impact on the people health. For example, building with innovative designs have less chance of obtaining diseases such as allergy and many more. It is clear that health of people totally depend upon the design of the building.
In conclusion that design of building will have positive impact on people life and good infrastructure also impact on people health and mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun design seems to be countable; consider using: 'Few designs'.
Suggestion: Few designs
...building attribute to health of people. Few design have a scientific impact on the people ...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also impact on people health and mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28085106383 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76119393416 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5670446256 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455011323755 0.242375264174 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152615965393 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131682474413 0.071462118173 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305259575958 0.151781067708 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104638922316 0.0609392437508 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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