Recently, over packed products have sparked an ongoing controversy. While some people believe that producers should reduce or stop manufacturing such products, others maintain that it is the end user who should refrain purchasing such items. This essay will discuss why it is more of manufacturers' responsibility to avoid over packed products than the general public.
Firstly, the general public customarily purchases products which are readily available to them without thinking about the possible damages to the environment, except for a small fraction of the population. However, manufacturing companies are well aware of detrimental effects of extra packaging including waste's increase which, in turn, puts strain on waste management by requiring more landfills and recycling sites besides giving rise to plastic production as well as air, land, and water pollution. Therefore, in the first place, manufacturers should stop production of such goods.
Moreover, over packaging shoots up price of final products. By avoiding unnecessary wrappings, manufacturers would be able to lower prices and people would prefer to buy products with more reasonable prices. They can also win people's trust and loyalty by displaying their commitments to environment preservation through decreasing or avoiding extra layers of paper or plastic for packaging. Therefore, manufacturers can increase their sales figures through better strategies than over packing.
Despite the fact that avoiding over packaging is manufacturers' responsibility, end users can play their role by refusing to purchase such items.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is manufacturers' responsibility to reduce or stop producing goods with excess packaging due to environmental issues and cost saving but people can also help in this regard by curbing their tendency to buy such items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, except for, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74368231047 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06586840264 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8241170475 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.583333333 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.25397266985 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230048176773 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883646789483 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327715547706 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128961024215 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248625779243 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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