Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?
Over the last decade, over-packaging has been a controversial topic. While some great people believe that it is the producers' responsibility to avoid over-wrapping, the considerable number of individuals, who stress that consumers must take some actions in order to avoid excessive-packaging, should not be negligible. This essay will discuss both these views from a balanced perspective.
On the one hand, those who believe that it is a producers' duty to avoid over-packaging have their own respective reasons. These people usually cite the fact that, if anything creates a problem, we should put a halt to it from the beginning. In this case, manufacturers are causing the problem, and as a result, they have to avoid extra-packaging as a way to sell their products. Therefore, producers as the main reason for the issue should take full accountability and act more wisely.
On the other hand, it is not nonsensical to say that, users are also affecting the way producers exhibit their products. As a matter of fact, in today's modern life people try to exaggerate in their lifestyle and owing to that, most individuals spend a great deal of money on an over-packed product in glamorous boxes, which only used to make the product more luxurious. Thus, buyers as the targets of manufacturers should also blame for over-packaging.
In conclusion, heavy-packaging should be avoided by purchasers and producers. This essay discussed both these sides. In my opinion, over-boxing can be prevented initially by consumers and manufacturers if they share a collective responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'producers'' or 'producer's'?
Suggestion: producers'; producer's
...ome great people believe that it is the producers responsibility to avoid over-wrapping, ...
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Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'producers'' or 'producer's'?
Suggestion: producers'; producer's
...ne hand, those who believe that it is a producers duty to avoid over-packaging have their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26587301587 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42043005684 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3226021827 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.076923077 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322857044293 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103242220807 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729318521148 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190936471684 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051697428749 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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