is environment a alarming issue now a days?
The damage to the environment is increasing at an alarming rate mainly due to human activities. Even though a great deal of effort is being now made by governments all over the world , individuals also have a major role to play in the minimizing global environmental hazard.
To begin with, one of the major reasons for the pollution of the environment is the uncontrolled use of automobiles. If individuals can make a conscious effort to change their life styles by cutting down the use of private cars and use public transport , it would substantially reduce the burning of fossils fuels. In other words , serious attempt could be made by individuals to travel work regularly by buses and trains, which are cheap and abundant hence , individual perspective towards using these transport could help in the reduction of emissions produced by vehicles , and there by planning a vital role in addressing this issue.
In addition to this ,individual could play a significant role towards safety our environment by not using enormous amount of plastic in daily life, which is hazardous pollutant of the soil in other words , almost every consumer use plastics while doing shopping , and there is always use and throw culture instead of using this , using this, individuals efforts could be taken into account opting for eco friendly substitutes.
In conclusion, it seems to me that environmental problem is the worrying concern and individuals have a crucial role in joining hands with the government bin reducing the harm caused to the environment. Lack of individual participation could mean that addressing environmental issue is beyond reach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21132075472 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98468947096 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.001648497 50.4703680194 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.625 104.977214359 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.9669160288 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0856178627468 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485229500694 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517232110998 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585794886024 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497415709601 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 12.6369458128 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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