The environment we live in is in danger. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?
The importance of our environment being in danger, which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of the environment being in danger has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on its underlying causes. It can be agreed that the major degradant of our environment is deforestation. This essay will elaborate how deforestation due to industrialization is disrupting our environment and how the government can intervene to solve this issue and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are a number of reasons why our environment is in danger, but the most preponderant one is deforestation due to industrialization. For example, industries, in order to manufacture their products, indulge in logging of wood for raw materials which is one of the major sources of deforestation. Furthermore, deforestation leads to a deluge of problems like increase in greenhouse gasses, depletion of ozone layer, air pollution, and many other natural calamities which are major threats to our environment, thanks to the industries that are encroaching our forests.
Approaches to deal with deforestation due to industrialization are numerous, but the most effective one is with the help of government intervention which is unattainable and impracticable but feasible and comprehensible. For example, by implementing stringent rules and regulations, the government can ensure that factories and individuals apply environmentally friendly measures in manufacturing goods. Government intervention, therefore, can play a vital role in curbing all the problems that endanger our environment.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that deforestation due to industrialization is the major underlying cause for endangering our environment, although the way government intervention can help reduce these problems should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies that are encroaching our forests. Approaches to deal with deforestation du...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 5.75862068966 538% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7649122807 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73883317354 2.71678728327 138% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9404082579 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.363636364 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132872485233 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574481416545 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605030493605 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081160903272 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758626110522 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 12.6369458128 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.