The envornment we are live in is in danger due to various problems. So what do you think should be responsible for solving it.Is the government,
organizations or individuals.
Several problems of the bygone era are non-existant in the modern world but few of them are still emerging. Nowadays, its very difficullt for us to save our envornment from pollution. which has risen due to soil erozen, air and water pollution. In this essay i will discuss all the ways to prevent our Environment through government, companys and individual efforts.
Let's begin by looking at the government point of view, one of the major responsibilty of the government to make new rules and regulations to protect our enviroment from industrial waste. secondly, government should aware people about the problems and solutions of soil, water and air pollution
Turning towards the responsibility of the individual and organizations. Organizations should have to plant more and more trees and take steps to control the pollution created by the people.Moreover it is the responsibility of the individual to make our places clean and stop waste of the water
To conclude, it is clear that life is not possible without balance environment. so it is the responsibility of the individual, organisation and the government to make our environment neat and clean.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 187.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20320855615 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22964548656 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2969133047 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.625 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108564166215 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047102612708 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353738878098 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607618092574 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271783397996 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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