Essay-In under developed countries tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinion with relevant examples.
Tourism is one heritage that promotes wealth and economy to a country. This not only helps in increasing the wealth, it also gives the country a chance to expose its beauty to the neighbouring countries. This will invite so many tourists there by creating a friendly relationship worldwide.
Tourism depicts the amount of natural heritage that a country has and makes the country feel proud about it. It makes a person feel more than just visiting the place.As it is always said, a country should be in such a way that you actually feel more than what you see. It also helps in being one of the topnotch countries across the world.
An example to this would be to talk about New Zealand and United States. The former having lot of glaciers, creeks, grass mountains and lakes makes it more beautiful and the latter having important places like the New York city, The Grand Canyon and Las Vegas (city that never sleeps). People travelling to these countries feel like they are in heaven and they don’t feel like coming back as they are really stunned by the beauty around.
To paraphrase on what has been discussed above, tourism played a vital role in making the country proud and to stand apart from other countries across.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... feel more than just visiting the place.As it is always said, a country should be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7488372093 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32252822836 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3942727665 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129911331498 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546946375042 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042178557713 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829182297156 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471282954563 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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