Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet as eating meat can cause serious health problems? Do you agree and disagree?
Nowadays, people who eat non-vegetarian diet are facing lot of health-related issues. It is generally believed that a vegetarian diet adoption helps to avoid health related issues. Some people hold opinion that vegetarian diet has its own drawbacks. The contentious topic has been profoundly debated on several forums. I believe that vegetarian diet is good to avoid serious health problem namely heart related disease and obesity. I will reason my stance meticulously before implicating a rational conclusion.
Throwing weigh on my view, I think that vegetarian diet has a good amount of nutrient values and less fat. A sufficient amount vegetarian diet is easily available which does not need to harm any living creature so it is nature friendly. Moreover, Vegetarian diet has balanced amount of minerals and vitamins which are important for body functioning.
Juxtaposed to my view, some people have view that adopting vegetarian diet has its own problems because It is not possible to get plenty of vegetarian food at all places. A place which has extreme weather is not good for vegetarians. Moreover, meat has more energy than any vegetarian alternative with same quantity.
To recapitulate, even though there are some challenges present in strictly following a vegetarian diet, I believe that everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet to overcome health related issues like obesity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'weighs'.
Suggestion: weighs
...ting a rational conclusion. Throwing weigh on my view, I think that vegetarian die...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38812785388 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92835432703 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6327177467 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7692307692 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295545606632 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104835862467 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796103258718 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186354971233 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593298406639 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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