Nowadays, people who eat non-vegetarian food are facing lot of health-related issues. It is generally believed that a vegetarian diet adoption helps to avoid health related issues. Some people hold opinion that vegan diet has its own drawbacks. The contentious topic has been profoundly debated on several forums. I have faith in that plant-based diet helps to avoid serious health problem namely heart related disease and obesity. I will reason my stance meticulously before implicating a rational conclusion.
Throwing weigh on my view, firstly, I think that vegetarian diet has a good amount of nutrient values and a good amount of fiber which helps to control fat related problems. secondly, a sufficient amount of vegetarian diet is easily available in most of the places which does not require to harm any living creature so it is nature friendly. Moreover, Fruits and vegetables has balanced amount of minerals and vitamins which are important for body functioning.
Juxtaposed to my view, some people have view that adopting vegetarian diet has its own problems because It is not possible to grow vegetables plants geographic constraints. Possibly, a place which has extreme weather is not good for vegetarians. Moreover, meat has more energy than any vegetarian alternative with same quantity.
To recapitulate, even though some challenges present in strictly following a vegetarian diet, I accept as true that everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet to overcome numerous diet related inefficiency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'weighs'.
Suggestion: weighs
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... helps to control fat related problems. secondly, a sufficient amount of vegetarian diet...
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Message: Did you mean 'harming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: harming
...st of the places which does not require to harm any living creature so it is nature fri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43644067797 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98402273748 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1054874861 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249824107991 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815527342936 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746117590361 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155793892243 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654655223372 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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