Experience is the best teacher. Some people believe it is more effective than formal school study and books, what do you think?
Learning is a continuous process for humans throughout their life. There are people who believe that the best way to learn is by experience, even better than education while others disagree with this view. This essay will discuss how experience provides a better understanding of things.
To begin with, experience enhances the understanding of theories taught at school . The things learnt at school can be comprehended better when one witnesses its implementation in the field. For instance, civil engineering students cannot distinguish between silt and sand when they come in the field fresh despite knowing their different physical and chemical properties. It is only by experience that they learn the difference between by just looking at it. Thus, experience can improve learning.
Also, many skills are developed when they are practiced frequently. To learn to use the skills one needs to apply in his daily routine and experience it. For example, basics of music can be learnt in a music school but one cannot be master himself unless he practices it. Majority of the famous musicians did not go to a music school instead they mastered it by experience. Clearly,experience is a better way of learning.s
In conclusion, experience can enhance the understanding of things as well as it can polish the human skills. In my opinion, experience is more effective in learning than education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23111111111 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01880510706 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7050854579 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0714285714 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143339009723 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552055358043 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559138256612 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959818242217 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347223636032 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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