Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.
What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
Over the past few years, people's mentality has been changed wherein they hold more value for materialistic things, rather than any relation, or people, and now it has taken a drastic form wherein old people are confronting myriad predicaments regarding health issues and find themselves in desolation, which was not in past. Thus, I am going to bring both the causes and solutions for this statement.
To begin with, old people are true assets for any society or nation, as they have valuable contributions in several forms, but now they are facing agony, dejection on account of plethora reasons. Firstly, people have dipped themselves utterly in the technology, as a result, their thinking and imagination have been confined until a limited sphere, thus they like to interact with peers, but they do not have time to spend with older people, which older people require at such an age. On top of that, people have developed huge greediness owing to which they are not satisfied and prefer to toil round the clock, irrespective of having any thought for old people, which is the most notable reason. For instance, it has been seen in many surveys that people are so obsessed with the desires and requirements that they have kept all the relationships on the brink of negligence.
On the flip side, this problem can be mitigated with certain initiatives. Firstly, people should organize all the resources and certain fun activities where older people can indulge themselves so that they should not have any feeling of loneliness. Furthermore, people should make a proper schedule for work and life, as a result, people will be able to give time to older people, and hence older people can get a sense of togetherness. In addition, every family should make sure that there should be a proper diet and precaution for old people so that older people can be able to maintain themselves healthy and fit.
In conclusion, I opine that old people act as a guide on every stage of life due to their valuable experiences, and one can never become successful by ignoring them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...themselves in desolation, which was not in past. Thus, I am going to bring both the cau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 352.0 242.827586207 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62878514977 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548295454545 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4016574396 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.090909091 104.977214359 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.25397266985 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184006687567 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777974404806 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316470433209 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103377968857 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508025306063 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.94827586207 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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