Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay.
Recently, the phenomena that Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned or not it corresponding impact sparked a heated debate in the different startum of society. While many people believe that extreme sports bring positive impact to their lives, others feel that they pose a great danger to the precious human life. I will express my view with concrete argument and reasonable conclusion.
From psychological point of view, Perhaps the greatest benefit to people lives extreme sports bring excitement and thrill, and sense of accomplishment they get. They are climbing higher, jumping further, moving faster all in the name or personal glory and self-satisfaction.
For instance, extreme sports improves problem-solving and decision making skills.
Nevertheless, like the two side of the same coin, they pose the great danger to precious human life. between 2000 to 2011 more than four million injuries were attributed to extreme sports and kids also try to emulate them. if things go wrong then participants pay a heavy price as human aren't supposed to fly.
To recapitulate, there is some compelling argument on both sides extreme sports allows people enjoy few benefits. I profoundly believe that the threat and dangers extreme sports pose to human life outweigh its benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39512195122 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79929454868 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1876707167 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215255540343 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775443935256 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780462830587 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113679028168 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698493830895 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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