Firstly according to contemporary ages modern cultures are been changed and been similar when compared to the past.we find more positive development than negative development.furthermore,
disadvantage are also considered to be worth it.
modern cultures around the world has been changed in many ways compared to the past such as technologies,food,living lifestyle & culture,transportation ect... according to the contemporary ages
innovators have invented many more new technologies for the public to help themselves when in need.comparing to the past,additionally transportation,communication in mass media are more innovative
for eg: Metro trains&taxi services for quick accessions,mobile phones,televisions.In past we find less in transportation services and very rarely used television to convey news and rare usage of mobile phones.
moreover modern culture are helpful for the public which is easily accessible from a place to another and in may more ways
Due to the changes we find disadvantages are also considered to be worth it,they are been used in negative ways such as robbery and hacking bank accounts ect.... they are also been used to threaten public,
with many more disaster circumferences for eg: through hacking our mobile phones they get our bank funds.consequently government are rethinking and initiating new ideas to avoid it from the negative
circumference which are been held through modern cultures and taken by their hands so moreover we find safer solutions
to conclude modern cultures around the world have changed according through contemporary ages,rapidly in many ways in being very helpful to the public consequently,disadvantages are also been considered and government have
initiated through resolving all these problems and gets into the safer solutions
- many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves some people think that this is a good thing while others think that it has disadvantages discuss both views and give your own opinion 55
- Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field as long as they are playing well Do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Firstly according to contemporary ages modern cultures are been changed and been similar when compared to the past we find more positive development than negative development furthermore disadvantage are also considered to be worth it 77
- many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves some people think that this is a good thing while others think that it has disadvantages discuss both views and give your own opinion 55
- Company top level authorities should get their employees in decision making or should not Discuss 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...odern culture are helpful for the public which is easily accessible from a place ...
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...oblems and gets into the safer solutions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84051724138 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.13724556018 2.71678728327 152% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.5024630542 283% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.954657886 50.4703680194 382% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 338.75 104.977214359 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 20.9669160288 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.25397266985 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31955210286 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197960128264 0.0925447433944 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483371006659 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130792246631 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968883435095 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 12.6369458128 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 53.1260098522 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.54236453202 261% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 10.9458128079 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.48 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.94827586207 221% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.3980295567 242% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.5123152709 209% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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