Fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year. what are cause of this crucial problem and what are solution?
The problem of fresh water resources which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while others reject this nation. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate the negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that fresh water resources diminish in large cities because the water tanks are not clean very day. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that water pipes are very old. Hence, it is apparently why many are against this trend.
Steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but accessible and practicable. Besides, the government should provide purification sources for fresh water. Primarily, the fresh water pipes should be changed.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of fresh water resources diminish in large cities can be successfully addressed, provided that the above stated measures are taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29951690821 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68285188346 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589371980676 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0430006953 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7272727273 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266981508451 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959010905944 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639526363479 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169401252533 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362409507989 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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