Government should reduce their investment in
arts, music and painting. Agree or Disagree.
In the world many countries have different culture and spiritual things. Each country have there own culture in arts,music and paintings. Every year local government investing money to save and expand this culture. this essay will discuss government should cut there investment or continue and therefore, will reach on final conclusion.
To start with, each year local government making plan to expand there culture. governments have to invest more in arts, music and painting. With the rise of human development culture also developed. In example, statue of human, animals, paintings of human life, hunting, farming and old classical music these are very important aspect of human development. If government cut their investment these culture will be in danger.
On the other side, Millions of dollars governments investing in new projects. this is helping to save our arts, music and culture. in example, making a huge statue is not need but they are making and this is not going to save our culture.
In conclusion, governments should to have focus in old things like caves, old buildings and old musical things old games and plays. It is not require to build new copy of old things and forts. Real forts, buildings and assets bust be secured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11219512195 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58234522114 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551219512195 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0171278848 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8666666667 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208962871334 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754785558214 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088329742722 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11869338927 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507516356576 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.