Although every day in our life we hear about the problems caused by working long hours. Many people state that spending too much time in office is creating a huge gap between personal life and professional life. Through the course of this essay, I shall put forth my points and calculations on plausible problems caused by spending long hours at work.
Working long hours at work cause lot of problems. Firstly, working for long hours in office and sitting at the same place without moving can cause so many diseases such as obesity, back pain and many more. Sometime these diseases have long lasting impact of health which are incurable. Then there are few cases where work pressure creates no balance between personal life and professional life and it lead to depression.
There are few aspects on working long hours that need special mentioning. It can be seen that it impacts relationships between wife and husband and can end up with divorce between couples. For example, the elder family member working for 16 to 18 hours per day will not be able to spend time with his wife and children. This example clearly explains us professional work will impact our personal life if we don't give enough time to families.
According to the aforementioned arguments, one can reach out to conclusion that for a healthy lifestyle and family bonding one has to divide his/her time between professional life and personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92531120332 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52107386504 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8103472743 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9166666667 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245452200458 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973956593013 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071445623443 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161395837454 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900124153287 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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