If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished? State your answer and give your reasons. OR If a five year old commits a crime (any kind), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of a child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child’s behavior?
Child learns from their parents. They provide initial learning environment to children. These days, there is an ongoing debate that whether parents are responsible for the wrong doing of their child and who should be punished for these crimes. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons for this kind of behavior.
Bad behavior has its own reasons. Children who perform any act which is not good for the society should be given warnings by the parents. Parents need to keep an eye on their kids. They should be given appropriate love and kindness, however, etiquettes should also be taught frequently. For the wrong doing by children, parents should give them small punishments like not providing them their favorite food or disallowing to play with their best friends. By these small punishments, it is highly likely that children will refrain from doing wrong acts again.
Similarly, parents who scolded their children are not good for their social, mental and physiological health. Though, it is responsibility of the parents for any crime done by five years old kid. For instance, the education provided by Muhammad; prophet of God, children should be taught till the age of seven. According to him, parents should not punish for prayer till the age of seven. Parent only punish after the age of ten years. Hence, we can infer from above that parents need to educate their children steadily till the age of puberty. Nevertheless, the whole responsibility is on parents.
In a nutshell, parents are responsible for the acts by children although they need to educate their kids slowly with very small punishment. The essay discussed the roles of parents in their children's life and way of punishment on their wrong doings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03472222222 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57524682684 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8929206897 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3157894737 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37865201328 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123916950264 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698692559438 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246475438629 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538232630998 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.1260098522 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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