Imitating celebrities in sports and movies good or bad?
Hero worship is in our blood. Heroes and film celebrities are found everywhere, at the billboards, newspapers, internet and television advertisements. This omnipresence has made them earn a lot of fame. They have thousands of fan followers throughout the globe. The moot question is, either it is good or bad to imitate these celebrities in our daily lives. I will discuss both the aspects and will offer my viewpoints along with reasons.
Most of the celebrities, unfortunately, do not pose a good example. They have the wasteful lifestyle, they wear expensively branded garments and drive super luxurious cars. As they earn millions of dollars it does not matters them, the problem occurs when an average earner try to imitate them who cannot afford such lifestyle. Wafer thin models promote bad eating habits. The photoshop effects hide the reality and inspire the young generation to resemble their appearance.
One thing should be kept in mind that all these popular personalities have burnt the midnight oil to reach their respective destination. They did not give up the hard work and possessed strong determination. They send a strong message that by motivation, self-confidence, and inspiration one can achieve anything that looks impossible but by excelling in a particular field does not mean that they are perfect in all the walks of life.
To warp up, in my personal opinion it is no harm in imitating the celebrities and heroes in the particular field for which they are known, the problem occurs when we try to imitate everything related to their lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'matter'
Suggestion: matter
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...the walks of life. To warp up, in my personal opinion it is no harm in imitating the celebrit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... everything related to their lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13178294574 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95975854806 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.4301508114 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2666666667 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 7.25397266985 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156465416559 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489486780179 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834716605213 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974092087104 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630377732295 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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