Individuals today have more information about health than at any time in the past. Yet, people are increasingly suffering from fitness
and diet- related diseases. Why is this happening ? What can be done to prevent it ?
Recently, for the past few decades, health is the major subject of discussion among all age groups.
Health, diet and workout are the ideas behind many new starup's that has sprouted in our society.
Though internet is bombarded with many articles and informations regarding health, diet and ways to
overcome issues related to health, we are least concerned to practise them as a part of our life.
Though, we have access to thousands of articles in web, we are keen to follow those treatments and steps
that can gove us a quick result in shaping our body. Likewise, we also search for tablets that can
quickly reduce our fat and give us a petrfect body within the snap of our finger. But unfortunately such
quick methods and treatments lead them into more health complications. For example, a lead actor named Lewinski
underwent a month treatment for reducing his excess fat, that resulted in overall reduction of good cholestrol
that lead to fatigue and mood swings. Finally, he was hospitalised for few days and recovered well.
Moreover, we should learn to lead a healthy life and practise them in day to day basis. It doesn't
stop there, we have to teach the same to our friends and family about the pros and cons of maintaining
good health and having a balanced diet. We need to encourage ourselves by having motivational posters in
our rooms that can get us going instead of laying lazy on bed. Browsing through web for authentic articles
or consulting a dietician to get proper diet chart and workout plan is worth spending time and money.
To conclude with, excercise and proper balanced diet can take our our future into a healthy generation which
in turn will lead into a healthy planet. Good workout plans and diet chart can keep us away from all health complications
and make us better by each day.
- Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree? 80
- Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss 80
- Some people think that it would be better for large companies andindustry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres.Others believe that companies and industries should remain inmore urban areas.Choose which position you most agree with and dis 77
- Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and forsome it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this? 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 315.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86984126984 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52735101429 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 4.6157635468 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5187470922 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129024849655 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487438400072 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358302893628 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043560053339 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346581720767 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.