It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary. Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Over the last few decades, the popularity of having an extra year before going to university has been growing dramatically. While most people consider this trend as an opportunity to find yourself and defend the path way to the future occupation, many believe it is only a wasting of precious time. this essay will explore pros and cons of this tendency and prove why is is more beneficial.
First and foremost, with the adversment of the Internet, more and more young people face the difficult choice on which their fate depends - the type of occupation and consiquently the proper university to gain it. Thus taking extra year after school to understand yourself and your goals is becoming the most appropriate way. For instance, almost third American is used to spend this time travelling abroad and exploring the world.
However, with the hectic rhythm of life nowadays it could be difficult to keep up with peers. Thus, having a year before university can play a bad joke with future students, especially if you have spent it uselessly.
To summorize, it is obvious that having ob
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, third, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 1207.87684729 75% => OK
No of words: 184.0 242.827586207 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94565217391 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63352549591 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66847826087 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5880289822 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251921493873 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864701725265 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579601303438 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125516333722 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487442151724 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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