The effect of getting married before finishing studies and getting a good job, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. This essay will elaborate both the advantages and the disadvantages of getting married before finishing studies and getting a good job and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why getting married before finishing studies and getting a good job has proved to be beneficial for society, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that there are financial problems for the individuals who marry without having a secured job. For instance, unskilled professionals have casual or part-time jobs which do not generate enough income to support their household's daily expenditure and this results in poor living quality. Getting well-paid jobs, therefore, can play a vital role to have a quality lifestyle.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of getting married before finishing studies and getting a good job, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that people who get married at an early age are not mentally and emotionally fit to face challenges and responsibilities as a couple. For example, when they have children the level of stress increases dramatically due to their lack of experience and maturity to cope with these situations. Thus, it can play a vital role to face challenges and responsibilities in their married life.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of getting married before finishing studies and getting a good job, is prominent, although it has a number of drawbacks that should be well handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hus will lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2202166065 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91951313307 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.688356908 50.4703680194 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 104.977214359 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.9669160288 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38589993122 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178055452296 0.0925447433944 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124700023807 0.071462118173 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272638139316 0.151781067708 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660585036116 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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