Whether to get married before or after getting a university degree and a good job has sparked an ongoing controversy recently. While some people believe that it is better to marry before, others maintain that finishing studies and building a career should be prioritized to marriage. This essay will discuss why it is more sensible to marry after finishing education and securing a good job.
Many people give first priority to completing studies and landing a good job than to marriage. They think higher education brings about better job opportunities and getting a good job is a must to establish their own family. An increasing number of people prefer to get married in older ages than their twenties, for example, because they are in a far better economic state. Considering the high importance of the financial status in marriage, it is clear why many people opt to marry after finishing college and getting a decent job.
Despite the undeniable significance of having a well-paid job as an essential element in marriage, some people do not think it is necessary to secure it before getting married. These people are neglecting the hardship of finding a job in the current terrible job market with the high unemployment rate. They also overlook the fact that in recent years, for instance, the majority of the youth who have got married while studying, without having proper employment, have experienced early breakups.
In my opinion, completing studies which assist people to make a good career and as a result putting them in a stable financial state is a marriage prerequisite.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05681818182 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74344688366 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3563510457 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.363636364 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148095720015 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647999387442 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421288571029 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929856545354 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541485680691 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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